12/8/10

poem I wrote in about five minutes

(or less)

ON MYSELF, & THIS SITUATION I AM IN NOW.

on the surface:

bubbling and swirling,

interrupted thoughts, thumping

“beware of falling rock”

loud, ominous crashes

all around, surrounding

will it ever end?

but inside, peace.

calm, soft wind

light breezes

whispers, deep trust

fountains and trickling streams

willows and sycamores

geese nesting

hope for the end of this, punctuated with giggles,

peace.

(I wrote that very quickly. The goal is not for it to be good, but for it to be truth.)

2 comments:

  1. I can't remember if you share my love for Barbara Kingsolver or not, but this reminds me that when I was looking for a book to read after my finals were done that I found a book of her poetry! I didn't get it because I was in the mood for a novel, but I meant to tell you and didn't. So now I did!

    And I think the truth is better than being "good." Which makes this better than good.

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  2. oh man. I bet she has some gooood poetry!
    and thanks!

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